The Way to Write The Paragraph With Adequate and Inadequate Unity
A paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with a single topic. To be as effective as possible, a paragraph should contain each of the following: a topic sentence, adequate, development, unity, and coherence. As you will see, all of these traits overlap. Using and adapting them to your individual purposes will help you construct effective paragraphs.
A Topic Sentence: A topic sentence lets readers know the focus of a paragraph in simple and direct terms.
Adequate Development: The topic (introduced by the topic sentence) should be discussed fully and adequately. Again, particulars of this development vary from paragraph to paragraph, depending on the author’s purpose, so there are no firm rules about how long a paragraph should be. But student writers should be wary of paragraphs that only have two or three sentences.
Unity: In addition to being adequate, your supporting detail must be relevant, which means that every detail in a body paragraph must clearly and directly relate to the idea stated by the topic sentence of that paragraph.
Coherence: Unity among sentences in a paragraph is crucial, but it is not the only element needed to clearly communicate a topic. The relationships among the sentences in each paragraph need to be clear. Coherence is the trait that provides this clarity by making the paragraph easily understandable. To the writer all of the sentences in a paragraph might appear to be obviously related, but to a reader who is a stranger to the topic of the paper, the relationships between the sentences might not be so obvious.
Note: Introduction paragraphs and conclusion paragraphs within essays do not follow these paragraph rules so neatly. The purpose of these paragraphs is often not merely to state a point and adequately explain it; instead they strive to frame an essay by leading the reader into the paper and leading the reader out. Thus, oftentimes they do not contain the typical structure of a topic sentence followed by supporting details. In fact, it is difficult to apply strict rules to introductions and conclusions at all because they should be written so as to best carry out their purpose—whatever style that may involve. However these paragraphs, like all paragraphs, should still display unity and coherence.
Introducing Myself
Hello everybody, allow me to introducing myself. My name is Ida Yatul Patimah. Please call me Ida. I wash born in Rama Gunawan, October 24th 1994. Now I’m eighteen years old. I lived in Seputih Raman with my parents and my brother, I have one brother his name is M. Noval ramadhani. But now I’m stay in boarding house at JL. Batang Hari 38 metro city it’s not to far from Muhammadiyah university of metro. When I got birthday I always happy, because my family and friends gave me price. My high body is one hundred and forty three. My wight is fifty kilograms. I have pointed nose, long black hair, and light skin. In Metro city I have many friends because I’m kind and humble person. Then, I’m also care, friendly, patient and loyal person to my family and all people.
My hobby are watching television, shopping, play with my friends. Usually I watched the movie in my boarding house. I like watching television because watching television give me information and I can see actor and actress famous in Indonesia. Because sometime when I seen the event on television I got motivation and to entertain for me. But now, in boarding house I don’t have television and I just listening to the radio sometime. When I have free time, I usually studied with my friends in boarding house. After that I went to Chandra department store to playing time zone game. Because in time zone there are many game and make me happy. Usually I went to shopping such as shirt, shoes, bag or watch. But if I didn’t have money I just stay in boarding house. And my activities are cooking, make a cake, and joking with my friends.
My friends said I’m cute, care, funny and coward. I’m happy because my family and friends love me. I think I will become a smart person in English major. Because my parents always give me motivation and something important in my life. My parents is really care to me and they also love me very much.
I’m always request to Allah to make my family always happily ever after. I don’t know what will happen to me if they gone. For them I promise one day I will make they dream came true to give back what ever they give to me in all my life. Those are about myself.
Note: blue color the title
black color introductory and description (body paragraph)
green color identification (body paragraph)
read color councluding paragraph
A paragraph is a collection of related sentences dealing with a single topic. To be as effective as possible, a paragraph should contain each of the following: a topic sentence, adequate, development, unity, and coherence. As you will see, all of these traits overlap. Using and adapting them to your individual purposes will help you construct effective paragraphs.
A Topic Sentence: A topic sentence lets readers know the focus of a paragraph in simple and direct terms.
Adequate Development: The topic (introduced by the topic sentence) should be discussed fully and adequately. Again, particulars of this development vary from paragraph to paragraph, depending on the author’s purpose, so there are no firm rules about how long a paragraph should be. But student writers should be wary of paragraphs that only have two or three sentences.
Unity: In addition to being adequate, your supporting detail must be relevant, which means that every detail in a body paragraph must clearly and directly relate to the idea stated by the topic sentence of that paragraph.
Coherence: Unity among sentences in a paragraph is crucial, but it is not the only element needed to clearly communicate a topic. The relationships among the sentences in each paragraph need to be clear. Coherence is the trait that provides this clarity by making the paragraph easily understandable. To the writer all of the sentences in a paragraph might appear to be obviously related, but to a reader who is a stranger to the topic of the paper, the relationships between the sentences might not be so obvious.
Note: Introduction paragraphs and conclusion paragraphs within essays do not follow these paragraph rules so neatly. The purpose of these paragraphs is often not merely to state a point and adequately explain it; instead they strive to frame an essay by leading the reader into the paper and leading the reader out. Thus, oftentimes they do not contain the typical structure of a topic sentence followed by supporting details. In fact, it is difficult to apply strict rules to introductions and conclusions at all because they should be written so as to best carry out their purpose—whatever style that may involve. However these paragraphs, like all paragraphs, should still display unity and coherence.
Introducing Myself
Hello everybody, allow me to introducing myself. My name is Ida Yatul Patimah. Please call me Ida. I wash born in Rama Gunawan, October 24th 1994. Now I’m eighteen years old. I lived in Seputih Raman with my parents and my brother, I have one brother his name is M. Noval ramadhani. But now I’m stay in boarding house at JL. Batang Hari 38 metro city it’s not to far from Muhammadiyah university of metro. When I got birthday I always happy, because my family and friends gave me price. My high body is one hundred and forty three. My wight is fifty kilograms. I have pointed nose, long black hair, and light skin. In Metro city I have many friends because I’m kind and humble person. Then, I’m also care, friendly, patient and loyal person to my family and all people.
My hobby are watching television, shopping, play with my friends. Usually I watched the movie in my boarding house. I like watching television because watching television give me information and I can see actor and actress famous in Indonesia. Because sometime when I seen the event on television I got motivation and to entertain for me. But now, in boarding house I don’t have television and I just listening to the radio sometime. When I have free time, I usually studied with my friends in boarding house. After that I went to Chandra department store to playing time zone game. Because in time zone there are many game and make me happy. Usually I went to shopping such as shirt, shoes, bag or watch. But if I didn’t have money I just stay in boarding house. And my activities are cooking, make a cake, and joking with my friends.
My friends said I’m cute, care, funny and coward. I’m happy because my family and friends love me. I think I will become a smart person in English major. Because my parents always give me motivation and something important in my life. My parents is really care to me and they also love me very much.
I’m always request to Allah to make my family always happily ever after. I don’t know what will happen to me if they gone. For them I promise one day I will make they dream came true to give back what ever they give to me in all my life. Those are about myself.
Note: blue color the title
black color introductory and description (body paragraph)
green color identification (body paragraph)
read color councluding paragraph